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안녕하세요. 좋은 문장이 되기 위해 수정할 부분이 많아 보이고, 제시하신 조건도 모호합니다만 원문을 최대한 살린 채 수정해 보았습니다. 아래와 같습니다. 1.May 17 this year,the girls in the 2nd grade class 4 played the final round of the sports league. 2.It was held in the gym. 3.Girls played dodge ball,and boys played soccer in the sport league game. 4.However,only the girls who are in the 2nd grade class 4.(<-뒷부분이 빠진 문장 같네요) 5.The girls were not only good at playing dodge ball but also good at unity. 6.The girls played in the league,helping each other. 7.The reason why ♡♡(학교 이름이라) held the sports league event was to entertain the students. 8.Whether the students won the first place or not,they played without regret. 9.They enjoyed the league and encouraged each other as if they were the first place winners. 10.After the league, the 2nd grade class 4 became a stronger team.
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